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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3006
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;请注意分段。

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The way success have became a hot topic in our daily life recently ,especially for students.At the same times,more and more parents are paying their attentions on it. F From my part,i think if a student want be successful in their study,they must finished the following things.First of all,they must pay enough attentions on their study and communicated more with their classmates and their teachers.Secondly,it is high time that they should get more information from outside world and do more exercise after their class.Last but not the least,the most important things is that they must be more confident in themselves . In a word,Only you have do those and you will make it.

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