2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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There are some notes from America.It's talk about education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates. First,less than high school diploma unemployment rate is 14.1%,median weekly earnings 451$.High school diploma unemployment rate is 9.4%,median weekly earnings 638$.Second,some college ,but no degree,they unemployment rate 8.7%,median weekly earnings 719$.Associate degree unemployment rate 4.9%,median weekly earnings 768$.Third,bachelor's degree unemployment rate 4.9%,median weekly earnings 1053$.Finally,master's degree unemployment rate is 3.6%,median weekly earnings 1263$.Professional degree unemployment rate is 2.4%,median weekly earnings 1665$. Doctoral degree unemployment rate is 2.5%,median weekly earnings 1551$. And we can see,the higher degree ,the more money.But what makes the situation. At the end of the day,Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.So we should study hard,and we'll have a promising future.