2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success
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The way success is becoming a hot topic in our daily life recently ,especially for students.At the same times,more and more parents are paying their attentions on it. From my part,i think if a student want be successful in their study,they must finished the following things.First of all,they must pay enough attentions on their study and communicated more with their classmates and their teachers.Secondly,it is high time that they should get more information from outside world and do more exercise after their class.Last but not least,the most important things are that they have to be more confident in themselves . For the majority of people ,what i have said above are very difficult to do it.However,I am also believed is that there is a will ,there is a way.