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Nowadays,many college students are busy with preparing for exam,such as computer and so on.A lot of them aattending these exam intend to get the certificates. There are many reasons for the phenomenon.First,some think that it gives them more chance to get a better work.Second,others consider that the exam provides a chance that they can study some knowledge.It can prove that they are able to do some besides major.Third,the rest hold that they do it want to keep up with others.They don't know why they choose the certificate. As far as i can see,college students can take part in certify exam.But, at first they should know why they do it.What's more, they should cosider whether the certificate is benefit for their future life.