2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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with the devopement of the science and ecnoice ,computer are walking to our daitly life and mostly famliy .at the same time ,the relationship betwen computer and man is more juge . for example ,using compter to working and being excied by computer and making a good frieds exc. such strong and usful a computer is ! computer is opened eyes towards outside world ;computer is warm hands to give help and get help ; compter is loding our drame.therefor ,we regard the computer as a way to learn and realise the drame .we can learn hardly everything by cmputer . so ,computer contrubitue to a more efficet and colorful life . in a conclde ,the relationship about computer and man is so great that we couldn't leave it!