2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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With the technology developed more and more fast,the education is a worthy inrestment,especially in the find the world.The degree is very important.But,in fact the unemployment more and more in the China,and in the world .Now,I condision the degree is low,so it's very easy unemployment,degree high is unemployment low.The Doctoral degree have 1.9%unemployment,the Master's degree have 4.0%,Bachelor's degree have 5.4%,some college no degree have 9.2%.High school diploma have 10.3%,less than a high school diploma have 14.9%. In my opinion,I think the education is very important in the day.It's not only can we learn some knowledge and to improve yourself but also can give our a better career and a good degree.As a student in the college,we should hard study,and study more useful knowledge.In order to find a good work in the further.As a say"knowledge is a power".so I think the education is very important in the world.