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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习。

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Maintaining trust is of great importance to both ourselves and our society.We would live an unhappy and life without trust.Our society might be not harmony if we wouldn't trust each other , our country or our society. However,there are too many event happened in our society destruct our trust .For instance,many persons who help the old person are to blame the person who run into the old.In my point events like this make us don't trust each other.And in the long run,less and less persons would like to help others. What do we should do to maintain trust?As for as I'm concerned,First of all,we should recognize the importance of trust.Secondly,we ought to put us in others' position and consider more for others.Only in this way can we maintain trust.

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