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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46213
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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People on their smartphone Now with the development of economy and science and technology,smartphone is becoming more and more popular among people. The phenomenon has some reasons.First of all,the living standard of people is raise.I think it is an important reason.Smartphone can provide all kinds of amusements such as playing games,listening to music,studying on the internet and so on.What`s more,we can search information which we want no matter when and where. However,as we all known,every coin has two sides.First,focusing our eyes on the smartphone too long is bad for our eyes.Besides,we often ignore what happen around us.What`s worse,it is dangerous that people use smartphone when they across the street. In a world,making full use of smartphone can help us living better.

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