题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文章层次较为清晰;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
In recent years, the trust between people has been becoming a little kind of subtle,which is leading us to an unhealthy attitude to our lives.faced the risk,we must think about what we should do to deal with it,we should find out the reason and know the importance of trust clearly. Trust supports the good relationship between people. The human being are sociable,and we cannot live alonely.There is on doubt that everyone hopes to be accpted by others,we need others admit our achievements,need others point out our shortcomes, need others take care of us and listen t us when we are in some trouble.Only we have the trust,can all of these be reached . Trust is vital of cooperating in all fields. It is important that the faulty of the companies,the sectors and other orgnasions have trust each other. Trust can make sure the society to operate smooothly,and make progress.