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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication In modern society white-collor wokers are required to master many sort of abilities.It is not only about hard skill,but also about soft skill Interpersonal relation is the most important ability within those skills.people maybe wonder why the reason it is,actually we can understand a simple phenomenen that human society is composed by each man and woman.There is no occupation that can be done without communication.People contact with each other.We receive and send message to our friedns,workmates and competitive opponents,so conveying message is a bridge to solve problem,that is the reason why people say interpersonal is much important than anyother things Somebody always puzzle that they find it is very hard for them to get on people,they are nervious when they are talking with others,then they have to decide to avoid being around people.In fact,to develop interpersonal relation is not hard far behind from our imagination.people sometimes think too much about other people's attitude.They just need a little bit more courages.Finally they would realize that it is a fantastic to have good relations with others
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