可适当增加从句和长句的使用;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays,many college students are busy with preparing for exam,such as computer and so on.Most of them attending the test intend to obtain the certificates. There are many reasons can explain the phenomenon.To begin with,some think that it gives them more chance to get a better work.Then,others consider that the exam provides a chance that they can study some knowledge.It can prove that they are able to do some outside your major.Finally,the rest of them do this because they want to keep up with others.They don't know why they choose the certificate. As far as i can see,college students can take part in certify exam.But at first they should know why they do it.What's more, they should cosider whether the certificate is benefit for their future life.