2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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with the economic's development ,our life turn to more advanced,because of the computer,we can ruduce many truble that we can use it to reserve,so we would become lazy ,and we can't live if we haven't computer beside us. that is the computer's margine,ther atractive everyone and make them can't control themself,people can't do anything once we away it, think it carefuly,does it right that people so deeply rely on computer?no ,it's so bad situation of people's life,we must change it ,unless,we would lose the basis ability of live ,with it ,the distance among human would be far,how awful of it!