GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

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The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.” We all know everything in the world has its vaulue.As one said the function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. I am totally agreed with the topic. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, we are in the objective world which is made of the natural ,just like the sun rise,sunset and the flower blosom in the spring.The leaves fall down in the autum. Everything is going on according to the rules. Just like ourselves, we burn,we grow up, we marry, we have babies ,we grow old.There science is on the study of these rules.So I think it's right to say the funtion of science is to reassure or to discover the natural rules in the world.The purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.” As for me, science and art is just like the two sides of one coin, we can't seprate them from each other. Threrin lies the value of each. On the other hand ,we like to talk about how we feel ,how we think about the world.So the human create the art,music ,literary and so on. The art is how we think of the true world. Of course, different people have different opinions on the same things