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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;若增加一些长难句的使用,文章会更好;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误;可以适当增加副词的使用;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
My name is Li Ming,Male,born in June 15th 1986.unmarried.graduated from North University emglish department.all of homework are excellent in the school.i am good at english speaking,writing,listening abilitity.the second language is german,be provided with german common expression。besides,know well process of foreign trade,like playing baskball,singing and seeing movie。i want to be a foreign trade clerk.