2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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On Excessive Packaging At present,the social appear a situation that many goods are packaged excessive.And what makes the situation?There are some reasons. First,many people is concentrate on packaging,beautiful goods can appealing people's sight.It have a major impact on excessive packaging .Second,some companies want more profits by this way.A good packaging can help them make more money.Finally, a good packaging could hide something,such as the goods' quality,appearance . In my opinion,excessive packaging is bad for consumers.Because they couldn't see the true goods,and excessive packaging maybe bad for their health,after all,it include some chemicals.Because of this,some department should blow up the regulatory with excessive packaging.And consumers shouldn't take more concentrate on packaging.