2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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the turning point in my life He was the first person who catch my eye. It was in my senior school, a sodden morning of the sunshine. We were waitting for the begining of the cample top ten singers competition . just then he appeared in my sight ,he was so brilliant ,elegant and unrestricted,and left a deep impression on me .Oh my god !he was the host . he was the first boy I admired in my young life .Looking back ,before I know him ,Iwas one of the girl grumpy ,wilful and never care about others feeling ,you don't even know I have few friends because of my ill temple In order to be close to him ,I set a series plans ,the most important one was to get rid of my shortcomings. For example ,be generous to my classmate and give a hand when they need a help. that is why I was always a kind -hearted ,optimistic and lovely image in the impression of you . love shines the most beautiful light of humanity ,but ,the reality was a lot of grittier -and a lot less romantic .When I speak out my love to you ,you turned me down .Although it is some difficult to accept this refuse, I also want to show my grateful to him and remembering the light to show to my way .Although we did not get together at last ,you let me change myself ,I can hardly think what I wil be if I did not change myself for you ,one thing I can be sure is I won't have so many friend if I did meet you .You are the one make the turning point in my life .