有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中部分句子有错误;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。
Nowdays,a lot of students does not pay attention to spelling while they learning English,should we approval this behavior,ofcurse not.why occur this situation,the view of my eyes,the important reason that students is so careless that think spelling is un important and they feels they have neccessary focus this small case,maybe it no value?If we don't take any action,would make a terrible result in furture. To change this situation,personaly,i think we should establish a good habit that pay much attention to spelling than before.Meanwhile,teacher could play a important role that provide much help such as inspect spelling to make students change. I hope that this phenomenon will disappear as fast as possible sooner or later.