2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Computer is more and more critical for us,we have many chances and much time to use it.By useing it,we can chat with others,we can watch videos from it,we even use it to help us improve our study. However,we also have to make a balance with other things.sometimes,we often enjoy it instead forgeting our parents and our friends,we have little time with them.In fact,they maybe want to have a face-to-face with us,we ignore it,we become more and more distant,it looks like a wall in front of us.What is more,we even give up exercise,influence our body.Based on a research,we have a high risk of heart diseases. So we should find a good way to make friends with computers.