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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3066
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
要求
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
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可适当增加从句和长句的使用;能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

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Nowadays,many college students are busy preparing for exam,such as computer and so on.Most of them attending the test intend to obtain the certificates. There are many reasons which can explain the phenomenon.To begin with,some think that it gives them more chance to get a better work.Then,others consider that the exam provides a chance that they can study some knowledge.It can prove that they are able to do some outside your major.Finally,the rest of them do this because they want to keep up with others.They don't know why they choose the certificate test. As far as I can see,college students can take part in certify exam.But at first they should know why they do it.What's more, they should cosider whether the certificate is beneficial for their future life.

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