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The Dragon Boat festival Nowadays traditional chinese culture has increasingly became popular in the world.Western folks are always interested in many chinese festival because that is a part of chinese culture,and the dragon boat festival is one of them What is the dragon boat festival?What is the origin of the festival?Why people call it dragon boat? Those questions are frequently asked by foreigners.If people want to figure out the problem,they need know something basic background knowledge about sinology.It was said that a household Chu Dynasty's poet who named Quyuan were throw himself into a river in order to show his loyalty after the fallen of Chu DYnasty.The subject of Chu dynasty very respected him.They volunteered to search his remain.There were too many people at that day,so situation seemed like having a boat race,meanwhile folks make ZHONGZI to feed fishes in case fishes ate the remain,so the story is the reason why people call it dragon festival In modern China,people combine the tradition with modern factors.Local government organize boat race competition annually.Public such like press also report many lifestyle news which releavant with the festival.Now the dragon festival is a good way for you to learn more about China