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The table contains information about the different ethnic groups making up the population of Atlantis City over two decades. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
文中用词稍显贫乏；文中从句数量过少；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；请注意分段。
This table shows the population of Atlantis City over the years from 1988 to 2008.During the twenty years, there is a staggering increase of total population from 89000 in1988 to 152000 in2008. However, the percentages of different people changed a lot. In 1988, Indian were minority only 12 percent of the whole population while Caucasian people took up the largest part of it. Polynesian are slightly more than S. E. Asian and they are both around a quarter of the total population. There are increases for Asian, Indian and Polynesian while the percentage of Caucasian has dropped from 68 percent to 47 percent in spite of the number of residents have increased.
