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2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2258
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
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Due to the budget shortfall in many countries , how to use the money effectively and to benefit people become a pivotal problem for the government. In this case, some people hold the opinion that government money should support more important things rather than artists. However, from my point of view, it depends on different circumstance. We have to admit that it is important that government invest enough money in scientific research and social service to improve the living conditions especially when the conditions do not meet the demand. For example, in the UK, thanks to the money put in the National Health Service, residents in the UK do not suffer from illness because they cannot afford any more. On the other hand, when the basic material needs are met, government should invest more in arts to boost its development. First of all, human beings have various needs and arts is an important one. Creative thoughts and original ideas can be expressed through art works. A highly civilized society is always accompanying thriving cultures and arts. Secondly, different regions format different arts, hence, arts and cultures are symbols for those regions which can unify people together.Morever, the arts provide a new way of seeing the world and understanding the word. It cultivates people's creativity and innovation. To sum up, the government should keep a balance of financial utilization and both invest on infrastructure services and the arts so that they can create a prospective society.y.

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