英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写电邮

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词；句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段。

From:Tom smith@hotmail.com To:John@163.com Dear John, I am the manager of Sales Department in our company.After our company discussing we decided at the negotiation of our business in 20,June,which about the launch date of the new product and advertising campaign.Last but not least,our company hope that we can contribute the combine relationship. Best wishes, Tom smith