拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;从句使用不足,建议增加长句和复杂句的使用;衔接成分很少出现,文章结构欠严谨;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
From: Tomsmith@hotmail.com To: John@ 163.com Date: June 10th Subject: our meeting Dear Mr. Driscoll, I’m the general manager of Sales Department in Fox Electronic Company. I’m honored on behalf of our company to inform you that our meeting is scheduled on June 20th. The launch date of the new product and advertising campaign will be discussed then. Please let me know if this would be convenient for you or contact me to offer your arrangement. Wish to establish long-term cooperative relationship with you. Best regards, Tom Smith