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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13043[网页划词已开启]
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
评语:

作者能较准确地使用学术词汇,不过存在个别拼写错误;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

As Known to all of us, communication is very important in our daily work and life. When I graduated from university and started my career in one World Fortune 500 Company, I attended a training with the subject of communication. The content mainly includes the importance of communication, the skill to communicate with our leaders, colleagues, clients, ect. I growed fast with the help of my senior manager, who interviewed me when I find the job before graduate. And he promoted me as a team leader, so I need to communicate with my site plant manager, function managers, prooduction managers and also with my team members who report to me. I found it is really very important for the people communicating with others.Besides, I communicated with my family members very well.Our family is very harmious.

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