题目要求:
围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。
字数要求:
200字以内
作者能较准确地使用学术词汇,不过存在个别拼写错误;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。
As Known to all of us, communication is very important in our daily work and life. When I graduated from university and started my career in one World Fortune 500 Company, I attended a training with the subject of communication. The content mainly includes the importance of communication, the skill to communicate with our leaders, colleagues, clients, ect. I growed fast with the help of my senior manager, who interviewed me when I find the job before graduate. And he promoted me as a team leader, so I need to communicate with my site plant manager, function managers, prooduction managers and also with my team members who report to me. I found it is really very important for the people communicating with others.Besides, I communicated with my family members very well.Our family is very harmious.