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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication As the contemporary society develops dramatically, an obvious problem that the Internet has an impact on the communication among individuals has sprung up. For example, it is a general phenomenon for us to chat with each other on the Internet at this technological golden age. Exactly, both of QQ and WeChat are extremely helpful function for the interpersonal communication. We can understanding family members, friends and another people better. Plus, we can also get some useful and latest information from the Internet. All in all, I believe that the Internet plays an important role in the interpersonal communication. And there is no doult that this production will become stronger and last forever in the future.
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