高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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That's begin to introduce my hometown In the past,my hometown has green tree in the round,the river also is clear,although,the house is easily,the road is narrow,people working poor life,but everyone is love the life environment,Now,the building is high,rode all has small or big car.development the industrial but the life environment is down,Because noly want to development So trees also to ruduce,fish is reduce too.this is a very impotment problem in the earth. So the govement should to deal with it in the first