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The impact of the internet on interpersonal communication Nowadays,the internet become the most popular thing in our daily life.Expectcailly social media,such as wechat,microblog,is the new main connect between people.Internet did brought deep impact on communication.There are two views agrued about the impact. One maintained that the Internet had break the barriar about time,space,and the shame.We can connect numarous people through internet with text,voice or even video any time in any palce.It is more convience than meet up face to face,because the fast living speed in the city is not allow people to diguss a approxiate time to meet up. The other voice that,the Internet makes the imformations spread so quickly,it takes us waste many value time in search and collect imformations.And the path of communicate always give us more space to express our emotion but it always get out of control.People can say bad word and do harmful things on the internet are more easily in the realiaty.The Internet may shorten the communicate spends but improve the barriar between people.People become lazier to meet friends. In my opinion,the Internet is like a cions.Meet friends on the weekend and connect with internet,try to find out the fit rate about internet.
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