2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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As time goes by, the technologe rapid development. And the midile phone has more and more fanctions. Then, the smartphone appears. As a result, you can see almost all of the person play with their smartphones in the public. There is no doubt that smartphones bring much convenience to our life. We can communicate with our family, our friends, and anyone who is from different countries more easily. We can watch movies whenever we want. We can shop online everywhere and so on. But at the same time, more and more person rely on their smartphones. they don't know what should they do without phones. They like making friends online with strangers instead of talking with their real friends.What's more , they are addictive to play games, chat online. So, their familys are ignored. Pack up your smartphone. More care about your family and friends.