2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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All around the world ,we can see a large number of eye-catch the young artists .They either wear broken jeans in the four season of a year ,or they do not wear shones in the winter ,or their excessive drinking ,or they always have a illusion that a masterpiece is created ,in fact ,they do not do creative anythings. As a matter of fact ,they are not artists ,Despite looking the part ,or they do it in order to consistent the other artist .but they forget "only unremitting effors can be successful