2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活，希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Nowadays,computers have become more and more important.Many people seem to cling to the computers. I must admit that computers do help us in many way.Students can study and look up much important material.People can work on the computers because using computers is relatively accurate.Moreover,people can relax themselves and know many other people online.Eventually,the most important point is that it is so convenient that everyone can learn to play computers. However,every coin has two sides.Maybe you just work or study on the computers.It still will hurt your health.Your body get rusty,your eyesight get descend and your mind get tired after a long time of using computers.What harms most is that many students will get addicted to the computer games.They even ship class and go to the Internet bar to play games. So no matter what you do on the computer,do not spend too much time.Everyone should go out of the home,breathe fresh air and do exercise.We should not be controlled by the computers.We should use them correctly and moderately.