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Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution? Nowadays, with the development of economic and people live a better life than before. People have more spare money to buy something that they want to buy. For instance , car.Then, the account of car increase drastically, and meanwhile the pollution of city become more serious. Some regard that putting a “pollution tax” on private cars is an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. I think this is a good suggestion to solution these problems. One the one hand, poor air quality is associated with cars pollution, so i think putting a "pollution tax" is necessary. On the other hand, people might be willing to buy cars because of pollution tax. Besides, pollution tax is good for trumpeting people to ride bike, which not only protect environment,but also save source. Putting a "pollution tax" is also superb way to add the tax of nation. As far as i concerned, putting a pollution tax have more advantages than some ways else. I also think it is effective way to persuade people decrease the using of vehicles.
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