2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer is playing a role in our life.every people use computer,some people can make use of the computer,some cann't use the compter. because everyone should use computer.computer can help us to do everything it can. every people should use computer.In our life,computer is related to the man.People can use computer to work,study,see the doctor,search in the internet and so on.Computer is very important is our life.