2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中能较恰当地使用学术词汇，但存在较多拼写错误。

In a sense,environment could play important role in campus when students learning,therefore greating a green campus is an essential work. However,green camous is not only transplant some trees,flowers and grass,but also establish a green cultural surrounding,especially a green tnternet. To creating a green compus,this is everyone's responsibility,school's department could approximately add up money to plant as much as possible,build a let students feeling relax and pleasant environment.students should devolop a healthy psychologic,resis unhealthy temptation,civilized internet. A green campus to students just as water to fish,so let's us contribuate everyone ablity .