2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能较多样地使用词汇，学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

In a sense,environment could play an important role in campus when students learning,therefore greating a green campus is essential work. However,green campus is not only transplant some trees,flowers and grass,but also establish a green cultural surrounding,especially a green internet. To creating a green compus,this is everyone's responsibility,school's department could approximately add up money to plant as much as possible,build a make students feeling relax and pleasant environment.students should develop a healthy psychologic,resist unhealthy temptation,civilized internet. A green campus to students just as water to fish,so let's us contribuate everyone ability .