文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
As the rapid development of Internet,computer is becoming a important part of our lives.It has a great influence on many aspects of our lives,especially our interpersonal communication. With the help of the Internet,communication is becoming easier and easier.We could use MSN or QQ to chat with each other ,also many friends can chat together in the chat room.Though we have a long distance with our friends,we could see each other thorough the Internet.We could send email to others ,which could waste no time to reach the receiver. However,the Internet also has a bad influence on interpersonal communication.For instance,we would turn others for help or consult others ,which can improve our friendship,without the Internet. We should make full use of the Internet to develop a better interpersonal communication.
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