题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
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On maintaining trust is important for everybody. Trust is the basic attainment for us,we can communication with each other with it.But somebody is lack of it,so peopie do not like living with them.so we shuold keep this quality forever. Now,let us think how we can make a trust with others.first,we should not lie others or they will keep away from you.