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From the picture, it is easy for us to learn that a man is cutting his hair. Haircut is normal, however, when you read the words under the picture, how you feel? 300, that's too expensive for me to afford. Does he mad? The answer is passive. There is no denying the fact that more and more people regard it is receivable to spend 300 in imitating the figure, what their idiot looks like, especially among the young people. Ether the clothes, the handbags, the shoes, or the hair style, just show in the picture, and so on. So, in their eyes, they don't care about money, as long as they really like. Maybe that's an outstanding way for them to show off, to display their personality, and to prove they are the real fan. However, as far as I am concerned, it's irrational and unnecessary. If his idiot changes his hair style next week, what should he do? Instead of, we can buy some magazines, posters, or a T-shirt, for these can be kept for a long time, and with time by, it can be more and more valuable.