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2006年考研英语作文真题:盲目的崇拜

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:57浏览次数:2858
要求:
题目 盲目的崇拜(题目自拟)
说明 Study the following photos carefully and write an essay of 160~200 words
要求
1.describe the photos briefly
2.interpret the social phenomenon reflected by them
3.give your point of view

字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
评语:

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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From the picture, it is easy for us to learn that a man is cutting his hair. Haircut is normal, however, when you read the words under the picture, how you feel? 300, that's too expensive for me to afford. Does he mad? The answer is passive. There is no denying the fact that more and more people regard it is receivable to spend 300 in imitating the figure, what their idiot looks like, especially among the young people. Ether the clothes, the handbags, the shoes, or the hair style, just show in the picture, and so on. So, in their eyes, they don't care about money, as long as they really like. Maybe that's an outstanding way for them to show off, to display their personality, and to prove they are the real fan. However, as far as I am concerned, it's irrational and unnecessary. If his idiot changes his hair style next week, what should he do? Instead of, we can buy some magazines, posters, or a T-shirt, for these can be kept for a long time, and with time by, it can be more and more valuable.

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