2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

In learning English,you couldn't find a shortcut to get a good command of English easily.You should be diligence and get ready for prolonged effort.Now,there are series of strategies to help you improve English. No words no anything.What we say is based on words.So we are supposed to memorize lots of new words.But it is at fault to cram your head with too many new words at a time.we should deal with different words in different way.