2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer is vary used by us today.It is becoming a important role in our life.we use it to caculate,to send messages and to chat with my friends who in other cities.Besides,we can learn more knowledges those we can not get form the book.It is useful to us.Howerever the computer useful it is ,it just a tool used by man.