Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;可适当增加从句和长句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
In learning English,you couldn't find a shortcut to get a good command of English easily.You should be diligence and make prolonged effort.Now,there are series of strategies to help you improve English. No words no anything.What we say is based on words.So we are supposed to memorize lots of new words.But it is at error to cram your head with too many new words at a time.What you need to do is to deal with new words in different ways in accordance with how frequently they occur in everyday use.While active and useful words demand constant practice,words that don't occur often in everyday English require just a nodding acquaintance. In addition,listening more and reading more is also a good way to learning English.Listening to English on a regular basis can improve your earing.English tape and radio is a good select.After listening,rehearsing loudly can confirm what you learned. English books and magazines can broaden our horizon to the outside world.Native speakers using English is in an idiomatic way,what we can do is to try to adapt ourselves to it. All the things that I mentioned above are the applied strategies to improve your English.It is impossible to have a good command of English a short duration of time.Let's come to make it.