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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear KPOHsales Company, I have acquired the new production produced by your company which sized 5670 in the New York Exhibition host between December 12th and December 15tn. I am extremely interested in it. Please send me a price list and instruction about your new production, my email address is hubin@163.com. Thanks for your coorperating and wishing establish business relationship with your firm! Yours Sincerely Hubin December 16th
