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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(40):态度决定一切

发布时间:2013-10-11 18:01浏览次数:724
要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Some years ago, leaving the farm to work in the city, three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay. But three years later, they received different wages. So their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss, who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.
The three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times. Jim, who received 500 dollars a month, got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself. Frank, the 1000 dollars a month brother with a list of more cargoes. George, the 1500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.
 
[写作内容]
1.概括该故事的内容要点,该部分的字数大约30词左右;
2.就“态度决定一切”这个主题发表你的看法,至少包含以下的内容要点,该部分的字数大约120词左右。
1)你认为是什么导致三兄弟的薪酬差异;
2)你从这个故事得到什么启示;
3)你对 “态度决定一切”如何理解?
4) 举一对比事例说明不同的学习态度产生不同的结果。
 [写作要求]
你可以使用实例可其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。 
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文中应增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;请注意分段。

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The story tells us that three brothers worked at the same company and got the same wages but some years their wages are different because thier way to work was different. Through the passage, i think that tthe difference of the wages of three btrothers is because their attitudes to the work are different.After reading,i learn a lot from the story.The attutide depends anything.If we dont have a positive attitude,we will never do the things well.As i am concered,the attitude is just like the quality of the clothing.Good or bad,depends the quality.We can take some examples to understand it better.As we all known,who is lazy,who will get the low mark in the exam,on the contray,the studious will get good mark.

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