2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing succeeds without a strong will.Many succeful people have strong will,strong will is when not say 'No' in trouble,they believe themselves. there are three for why the people with strong will maybe succeeful.First,they not give up when they in trouble,they continu doing things that they think alright.Second,they more esy than others to get a job,many companys need the worker with strong will.Third,in glob wold compition everwhere. Not noly works but also student need buid a strong will.If we students don't study hard we will do nothing.So we must have strong will.