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2003年1月英语六级作文真题:关于诚实

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:23浏览次数:1000
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误。

用户练习作文:

In current society,there appear some dishonest phenomenons around us,causing our will not to trust other fellow expect our parents.tasks were done with dishonest for achieving their goal among colleague . We are all neglect the importance not only for other people but also to our development in a long run.so,we should develop honest during study in the campus ,work in the company and deal with the customers.however,if other colleague find your dishonest they want to make clearly friends with you .you will be difficut to promote. in my view ,we should

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