2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

In modern social,computers play an important role in our life.People can use the computers to sufer the internet,to go shopping.However,just as an old saying goes ,every coin has two sides.There is no doubt that computer has its own setbacks. On one hand,more and more students turn to be addicted to computers games,which is badly affect their normal life.Once up they are addicted to them,they are hard to get rid of them.Just like take drugs. On the other hand, There are a lot of information on the intrnet,most of it is not very healthy.It will be harm to the development of adolecences. Certainly,computers has its good side,and there is no doubt that the benefit of computers is more than the setbacks. In a world, we should get good use its benefits and try our best to avoid the disadvantages.Computers are a good tool to help improve ourselves.