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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33570
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分85.5分
评语:

作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

economical habit and smart shopping personally speaking, we should save as much as possible in our daily life as college students who are pursuing further study without a stable and sufficient economic resource. in the modern society, it'll be better to develop an economical habit, at the same time, to possess the ability for reasonable consumption. as far as i'm concerned, i'd like to make a small plan or list to figure it out what goods should i buy and calculate the approximate expense of them. moreover, even during shopping, i'll bargain with dealers. in this way, i can avoid spending money on some unnecessary things and can finish shopping in a more efficient way. on the other hand, we can not afford our own expenditure by ourselves alone even though we may do some part-time jobs. instead, most of time we need the financial support from our parents. in my opinion, as we come into the stage of young adulthood, we should try our best to support ourselves, meanwhile, live our lives in a economical way without continuously add more heavy burden to our gradually aged parents. we should learn how to make a living depending on ourselves. of course, i don't advocate to save money excessively regardless of reasonable shopping need. the idea that we should save more money in our mind will always remind us of careful selection and overall comparison in order to make a cost-effective choice. i believe we can become smart consumer with the help of the economical habit.

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