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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
economical habit and smart shopping personally speaking, we should save as much as possible in our daily life as college students who are pursuing further study without a stable and sufficient economic resource. in the modern society, it'll be better to develop an economical habit, at the same time, to possess the ability for reasonable consumption. as far as i'm concerned, i'd like to make a small plan or list to figure it out what goods should i buy and calculate the approximate expense of them. moreover, even during shopping, i'll bargain with dealers. in this way, i can avoid spending money on some unnecessary things and can finish shopping in a more efficient way. on the other hand, we can not afford our own expenditure by ourselves alone even though we may do some part-time jobs. instead, most of time we need the financial support from our parents. in my opinion, as we come into the stage of young adulthood, we should try our best to support ourselves, meanwhile, live our lives in a economical way without continuously add more heavy burden to our gradually aged parents. we should learn how to make a living depending on ourselves. of course, i don't advocate to save money excessively regardless of reasonable shopping need. the idea that we should save more money in our mind will always remind us of careful selection and overall comparison in order to make a cost-effective choice. i believe we can become smart consumer with the help of the economical habit.