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When a man has been born in the world ,he just an special animal that using two strong legs to walk ,trying to make intelligent meachine to help himself to do things easily. We do not know the difference between us and other lives until we got our own name. Some people believe that it is consistently important to have a name. While another argue that it does no matter whether we have a name. In my opinions, it is worthwhile for us to own a name for ourselves. It is an important sight for us to compare with another men or things.Like naming different kinds of animals on earth, we call them in special names. And then, we can reagnize them sooner and clearer. More than that, a name can help us to built up a wonderful human framework. We can not imagine the life without a name. Beside a name , how can we talk with each other and make stranger understand what we want him to know? After all, having a name is quite important.