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2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:37浏览次数:1771
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题目 On the Importance of a Name
要求
1.有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
2.有人认为非常重要;
3.你认为呢?
字数:150满分:100分
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文章词汇使用比较恰当,学术词汇积累不足;能够简单运用一些从句;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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When a man has been born in the world ,he just an special animal that using two strong legs to walk ,trying to make intelligent meachine to help himself to do things easily. We do not know the difference between us and other lives until we got our own name. Some people believe that it is consistently important to have a name. While another argue that it does no matter whether we have a name. In my opinions, it is worthwhile for us to own a name for ourselves. It is an important sight for us to compare with another men or things.Like naming different kinds of animals on earth, we call them in special names. And then, we can reagnize them sooner and clearer. More than that, a name can help us to built up a wonderful human framework. We can not imagine the life without a name. Beside a name , how can we talk with each other and make stranger understand what we want him to know? After all, having a name is quite important.

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