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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4563
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;从句数量偏少;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication As the contemporary society develops dramatically, an obvious problem that Internet has an impact on the communication which is among individuals has sprung up. For example, it is an universal phenomenon for us to chat with each other on the Internet at the technological age. In addition, both of QQ and WeChat are extremely helpful for the interpersonal communication. We can understand family, friends and another people better. Plus, we can also get more useful and latest information in time from the Internet. All in all, I insist that the Internet plays a significant role in the interpersonal communication. And there is no doubt that this production will become stronger and last forever in the future.

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