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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17596
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;句式变化多样;作者词汇基础不错,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活。

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In contemporary society, there is an increasing debeat on if snap judgements can be trusted. Some say yes,they argue that with limited time ,we have to make judgements quickly, while others disagree, they say that snap judgement is inevitably making errors, for they couldn't take everything into consideration. As far as i'm concerned, i'm stand by the latter.The reasons are as follows. First of all,snap judgememnt couldn't consider as many factors related with the problems which will cause errors or mistakes, therefore, it's unbelievable when making judgement.I remember the day when we chose our universities after Gaokao, one of my friend made his decision without any considering of the university's number of recruitment and number of applying for it, eventually, he failed his choice, he did not recruited by the university. Secondly, snap judgement is often related with carelessness and one-quick decision, which means that one makes decisions when he is unconcious or serious or just out of emotions,if snap judgement happens, can we trust it or not. Of course, no. therefore, careful judgement is a necessity. For instance, one of my relatives promises to buy his child a car as his son's gift of birthday when he is stunk, when he is awake, he can't practice his promise,he son then dislike him for his lie. in a word, snap judgement is untrustable, we should make judgment after taking many aspects into consideration, therefore, our judgement can ripe harvest, or they will end up with failure and loses.

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